tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5818760431138856246.post2987499747290315575..comments2023-08-28T18:45:19.077+05:30Comments on मेरी कविताएं: चूड़ियाँVijay K Shrotryiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03827025219585517128noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5818760431138856246.post-49421909280783919172012-10-28T12:31:33.764+05:302012-10-28T12:31:33.764+05:30Baccha maa ka haqh hai jaisa maa ke upar jatata ha...Baccha maa ka haqh hai jaisa maa ke upar jatata hai baccha (do saal)ka..oh ek unmol rista jo maa apne aap ko sajaati hai...choodi to ek bahana hai..oh sajaati ji hai..apni ek naya jeevan ko..oh ek vajjod bhari anubhuti hai..jo pyar ka lehar hai ..chandini ke kiran hai..oh ek moti ke chamak hai..oh sajaati hai tanmai bandhan ko..ek sanskar ko ek befikar hoke godi me khelne ki ek ijajat ko..ek..suraksha kawach ko..ek pyaar bhari ashirwad ko..oh choodi ek kehl hai un tamannaon ke jilmil riste ko sajaani ko...papa kya jane.<br /><br />Y SatyaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5818760431138856246.post-47773312067861580672012-10-26T14:18:48.254+05:302012-10-26T14:18:48.254+05:30मज़बूरी इंसान से क्या करवा सकती है ...ये आपकी कविता...मज़बूरी इंसान से क्या करवा सकती है ...ये आपकी कविता को पढ़ने के बाद अच्छे से समझ आता है .....सादर Anju (Anu) Chaudharyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01082866815160186295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5818760431138856246.post-70758073942970533742012-10-26T13:50:49.957+05:302012-10-26T13:50:49.957+05:30bahut behtareen... ek dum alag sa vishay... pahle ...bahut behtareen... ek dum alag sa vishay... pahle to maine socha ek baal sulabh gun ko aap kavita me jata rahe ho... fir iski gahrayee ko samajh paaya, jab aage padha... !! sach me dil se pasand aayeee:)मुकेश कुमार सिन्हाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131032296544030044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5818760431138856246.post-15585264383105041992012-10-25T07:27:06.209+05:302012-10-25T07:27:06.209+05:30बहुत अच्छा विषय बहुत अच्छा विषय Vandana Ramasinghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01400483506434772550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5818760431138856246.post-66953622305396757732012-10-24T18:36:08.397+05:302012-10-24T18:36:08.397+05:30बहुत सुन्दर प्रस्तुति!
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